• Chapters
• Improved timing (line by line)
• Split all “- -” double lines
• Honorifics, Japanese name order etc
• Basic typesetting
• Added italics for lines that are thoughts
• Some changes in the text

I decided to use “Master” when Miyo referred to Kiyoka. It makes a lot more sense than the “sir” used by Netflix or “husband/hubby/dear/honey/whatever” (since, after all, this is not his wife, and their relationship is far from close). Especially after a few sentences spoken by Kiyoka at the beginning of the episode. However, in the episode title I used “husband.” It may change in batch release though.

The video quality isn’t the best, but I haven’t found a better source than this one from Netflix so far.